I was imagining tactile sense of a dying man and the witnesses. About Raval's death and his last struggle with bark, you can read more about my in-depth thoughts on it in page Anatomy: Metaphorical Characteristics.
Elements picked out of this aftertaste:
bark/trees Raval was grabbig so tightly
Jöns's gesture of holding the girl back
the water-bag
Here's a video showing how I created the curved edge following Jön's motion, also the bark texture with twigs I've collected from Finsbury Park.
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